BREAKFAST

My favorite character is the gun, I think.

This game is very cute and charming! I love all of the quirky and fun characters. The casual style of the text adds a lot to the humor with the "delivery" of the lines. Very enjoyable experience especially for a gamejam game.

The writing is not my style and I won't judge it.
The animations are great and well made !

I got the "Good ending" ( that's what the end screen told me :))
Theme is respected as it was a one-of-its-kind chain reaction
No bugs but lots of typos are present

If I can give some advices (For Visual Novel writing) :
- Be careful of the font you used for the texts as it makes it hard to read (notably for people with dyslexia or other visual impairments) + the green cyberpunk design on the textbox

- In terms of visual novel, it is often wanted to not write emotes (:D) in the text as it breaks immersion and fluidity in the reading


You can feel the passion in the game, keep it up !

Its soooo cute! Im so excited for when its out <3